Well Braydon, I personally thought, what are you doing? You struck the ball with the hockey stick and it flew high in the air. When it got to the goals everyone thought it was going to be saved, but it just went right in. Then presto, we had a 4-0 win!! Do you think you could score another goal like that?? What do you think the other team would have thought about the goalie?
Here's my best comment Mr.Sales! Hi Tash, Your Jewish boy story is really good. I loved the introduction and all the words you used throughout the story. I did notice that you wrote 'Knowing that you and your parents could be thrown into a concerntartion camp sny minute of any day.' I don't know what the sny is. Could you write what type of things they eat and drink? I would like to know that. Great job... I loved it!
Hi Joel, Great questions! When they find the Nazi's, they kill them. They have to have a plan of coarse or the Nazi will kill them! They also have to check how many Nazi's there are before they attack. Say there is 15 Nazi's but only 3 Partisons, they wouldn't attack becuase they are convincingly outnumbered. To answer your second question, it depends on what sort of Partison and how much time they have. Say you are Felix, he wants to help as many people as he can but if he is on a strict time limit or has orders, no matter how much he wants to, he just CAN'T help. Thank you for commenting.
I would like to learn about, space and anything scientific, i would like to be a vet when im older so science would be a great topic to learn. What do you want to be when you are older?
P.S; I will definately look at your blog.
From Crystalxxx
That's probably one of my best comments, its not that long but I think it covers the description of a good comment. From Crystalxxx
Hey Dan the soccerroos are going to win they are my the best team I love them.I like liver pool to in the english comp on soccer to. So is soccer a really fun sport. I love soccer
Hey Christopher, Thanks for this great comment. No I have never saw a sinkhole before but I have read about the biggest sinkhole in the world. It is the one in the picture. From Harvey
Here's my best comment !! Hey Gracie, Great recount!! I really enjoyed it and it’s very descriptive. I like how you made the story sound really realistic! What was your favourite part of the whole Perth experience? I look forward to reading any future posts, so far your posts are great!! Great job!! Happy Blogging!!
Hi Mayan, Thankyou for commenting. Thankyou for the great questions,I have built my own track. It has a lot of obstacles and it also has a couple of weaponators in a row. I have also put in a couple of launch ramps and bounce pads to give players heaps of air. If you wan't to know I have added a sound track to finish off my track. The thing that helped me most was probably the weaponators, they were my favourite tool to use in the game.
Hi Stephanie Your story was very interesting and i thought your characters names were great and i especially thought the name Mrs Pineapple was good! How does Mrs Pineapple afford all of those ipods and iphones and if she is a millionaire why does she work at a school? What happens in that 5 years before they got married? I think you could have added on just that little bit more but that is a really good story beesides those parts. You had great punctuation and i didnt find any spelling mistakes. Good work! -Joel
Hi 6s, What has been your favourite thing we have learn't this year? Mine was learning about gold in H.S.I.E. What has been your favourite thing we have done this year? Mine was the camp in Mogo Town! I hope you guys and girls have had fun this year. Please reply! I want the whole class to. Now that would be something! Bye! From Chloe :-)
Thankyou so much for commenting on our blog! We love comments. The artworks took ages, but as you said, they're beautiful! The best thing about the excursion was the bush-dancing. It was so fun and interactive. Most definetly the best thing I have learned was, how life was at school. It was very interesting to see how life was at school and to see how strict life was.
Hey 6s ! Year six has been a really fun time, I've met new friends, talk to everyone and have learnt a lot ! I really enjoyed camp too !!! I'm so excited for Holidays because my friends is coming with me and after that, we're entering year 7 !!!!!!!!!! I'm going to miss primary school and the teaches. =D =D =D =D =D =D - Skye .T
Hey Crystal I love your story on the castle hill show. You have one spelling mistake that was edjucational but im sure you will fix it up soon. You also could of made some of your paragraphs a bit longer. But other than that your writing was fantastic! Just wondering what family members went to the show with you?
Hi Christopher, Thanks for your comment. I really like your blog too.
Bushfires are really bad and every year hundreds of people die from them. I had never heard of The Black Saturday Bushfire until we started learning about Natural Disasters.
Who's blog post was it? Many people in our class had chosen to do Bushfires for their presentations.
I chose to write about bushfires because at the time many bushfires were travelling around Australia. At that time my uncle was evacuated from his home. Luckily nothing was damaged and he and his family were fine. I will definitely look at your blog again soon.
If you had to write about a disaster what would you write about? Keep up the great work Christopher! From Natasha
The greatest blog comment I've done this year is this: Good discussion Braydon, I especially liked the part how you said homework stops kids from getting QUALITY family time. Nice job, keep up the good work! From Ian
THIS IS MY BEST COMMENT! Hi Mayan I have read that story too, It is a great story Im really liked it but the part when she died it made me cry. I really started to think what If we had thatm faith we could change the world. Just letting you know I am a christian and so is my family. Back to the questions If I bombed hiroshima I'd feel so badand turn myself in, then I would be aressted. CHICKEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hi Sara, My name is Jessica and I go to MACC. I am really excited to be quad blogging with you and your class. It sounds like you had alot of fun at the bake sale. What did you take in? Whats your favourite type of slice? From Jessica
This is my best comment, Hi Catherine my name is Mikaylan.It is good to see a post from a New Zealand school instead of mine !What is it like living in New Zealand anyway? If you are wondering what it's like in Australia it is pretty cool and everything is fun. I'm from New Zealand but never been. Thanks for checking out my blog and I'll talk to you later! Best Regards Mikaylan
Well done on your discussion about is bart simpson a good role model? The only thing i would do is make your arguments a little longer. But other than that I think your discussion. Your discussion was amazing what was your favourite part ? From Ally
Hi Carys, my name is Julien. I'm from MACC for our quadblogging. That picture is actually from the internet and is not a drawing. If you want to see some drawing go to my blog at http://6smaccjulien7.blogspot.com.au/. Happy Blogging! From Julien
Hey Dante,I’m Ben.I loved the halloween tree recount.It made me more interested in action books.I’m liking the look of your blog and if I get the book,I will read it and enjoy.Here is the link to my blog if you want to come and have a look at it http://www.6smaccben.blogspot.com Ben
Hey That has happened to me before when I went to my friends house which is over 2 hours away and when I got there I knocked on the door and no one answered. Then I realised that she was suppose to come to my house I had to drive all the way home and my mum was not happy at all because she is he one that was driving me and when I got back home I was to tired to do anything because of the long drive.
Did you end up seeing him ? What was his reaction when you told him you forgot that he was coming to your house ?
Hey Christopher, Thankyou for the comment about the post! Doing this assignment helped me learn more about Tsunamis as well! ^^ I have never seen a Tsunami before either, but those sound like some pretty big waves!^^ I wrote about this for a school assignment, but I chose Tsunamis because they sounded interesting. I also did one on bushfires - another one I enjoyed too!^^ I checked out your blog and it is really cool!^^ From Jasmine :D
I found an even better comment of mine so here it goes.
Hi Mayan, thank you for commenting on my blog. The reason why a small fire can start from a glass bottle is because when a sun ray comes in contact with a piece of glass, it is magnified and focused on a particular spot. If there is dry vegetation in this spot, a small fire can start. I have never experienced a bushfire but there has been a bushfire near my area. I would hate to be in a bushfire but I'm lucky that where I live there isn't a lot of bush. If I was trying to prevent bushfires I would be careful of my actions and help other people to not start a fire. If there was a fire I would call 000 straight away in your case I would call 911. Some people don't deliberately set fires on purpose but for those who do I have no idea why they do it . I will be sure to visit your blog and comment. Happy blogging !! Michelle
Hey Mr Sales I think im changing my favourite blog comment which I did on Viliamis blog in Quad blogging from Viscount School...
Hi Viliami I really like your story because of all the descriptive language and there is no mistakes in spelling and vocabulary. I also like how you wrote it in present tense and you used lots of language that engages people in your story, it makes me want more of the story. Anyway, Im just telling all of you that our school Mount Annan Christian College is having a Christmas holiday starting from next week on Thursday. We will be off for 6 weeks holidays and that’s what the most of Australia will be doing also. Some of us may be on our blogs in the holidays but im pretty sure that most people will be on holiday, im just telling you because we might not be on and commenting on your blogs. When do you guys go on holiday???
From Crystal xoxo
Anyway that's my favourite blog comment now thanks Crystal xoxo
Well Braydon, I personally thought, what are you doing? You struck the ball with the hockey stick and it flew high in the air. When it got to the goals everyone thought it was going to be saved, but it just went right in. Then presto, we had a 4-0 win!! Do you think you could score another goal like that?? What do you think the other team would have thought about the goalie?
ReplyDeleteRico
Here's my best comment Mr.Sales!
ReplyDeleteHi Tash,
Your Jewish boy story is really good. I loved the introduction and all the words you used throughout the story. I did notice that you wrote 'Knowing that you and your parents could be thrown into a concerntartion camp sny minute of any day.' I don't know what the sny is. Could you write what type of things they eat and drink? I would like to know that. Great job... I loved it!
Hi Joel,
ReplyDeleteGreat questions! When they find the Nazi's, they kill them. They have to have a plan of coarse or the Nazi will kill them! They also have to check how many Nazi's there are before they attack. Say there is 15 Nazi's but only 3 Partisons, they wouldn't attack becuase they are convincingly outnumbered. To answer your second question, it depends on what sort of Partison and how much time they have. Say you are Felix, he wants to help as many people as he can but if he is on a strict time limit or has orders, no matter how much he wants to, he just CAN'T help.
Thank you for commenting.
Hi Renitta
ReplyDeleteI would like to learn about, space and anything scientific, i would like to be a vet when im older so science would be a great topic to learn.
What do you want to be when you are older?
P.S; I will definately look at your blog.
From Crystalxxx
That's probably one of my best comments, its not that long but I think it covers the description of a good comment.
From Crystalxxx
Hey Dan the soccerroos are going to win they are my the best team I love them.I like liver pool to in the english comp on soccer to. So is soccer a really fun sport. I love soccer
ReplyDeleteHey Christopher,
ReplyDeleteThanks for this great comment.
No I have never saw a sinkhole before but I have read about the biggest sinkhole in the world. It is the one in the picture.
From Harvey
Here's my best comment !!
ReplyDeleteHey Gracie,
Great recount!!
I really enjoyed it and it’s very descriptive.
I like how you made the story sound really realistic!
What was your favourite part of the whole Perth experience?
I look forward to reading any future posts, so far your posts are great!!
Great job!! Happy Blogging!!
Hi Mayan,
ReplyDeleteThankyou for commenting. Thankyou for the great questions,I have built my own track. It has a lot of obstacles and it also has a couple of weaponators in a row. I have also put in a couple of launch ramps and bounce pads to give players heaps of air. If you wan't to know I have added a sound track to finish off my track. The thing that helped me most was probably the weaponators, they were my favourite tool to use in the game.
From Dan
Hi Stephanie
ReplyDeleteYour story was very interesting and i thought your characters names were great and i especially thought the name Mrs Pineapple was good! How does Mrs Pineapple afford all of those ipods and iphones and if she is a millionaire why does she work at a school? What happens in that 5 years before they got married? I think you could have added on just that little bit more but that is a really good story beesides those parts.
You had great punctuation and i didnt find any spelling mistakes.
Good work!
-Joel
This is probably one of my best comments...
ReplyDeleteHi 6s,
What has been your favourite thing we have learn't this year? Mine was learning about gold in H.S.I.E. What has been your favourite thing we have done this year? Mine was the camp in Mogo Town!
I hope you guys and girls have had fun this year. Please reply! I want the whole class to. Now that would be something!
Bye!
From Chloe :-)
This one of my better comments from Term 1!!
ReplyDeleteHello Mrs Todd,
Thankyou so much for commenting on our blog! We love comments. The artworks took ages, but as you said, they're beautiful! The best thing about the excursion was the bush-dancing. It was so fun and interactive. Most definetly the best thing I have learned was, how life was at school. It was very interesting to see how life was at school and to see how strict life was.
Your year 4 Student
Stephanie
:-)
Thanks Mr Sales! See you at school!
Hey 6s !
ReplyDeleteYear six has been a really fun time,
I've met new friends,
talk to everyone and have learnt a lot !
I really enjoyed camp too !!!
I'm so excited for Holidays because my friends is coming
with me and after that, we're entering year 7 !!!!!!!!!!
I'm going to miss primary school and the teaches.
=D =D =D =D =D =D
- Skye .T
Hey Crystal
ReplyDeleteI love your story on the castle hill show.
You have one spelling mistake that was edjucational but im sure you will fix it up soon. You also could of made some of your paragraphs a bit longer. But other than that your writing was fantastic! Just wondering what family members went to the show with you?
Great Job!
From Brooke :)
Hi Christopher,
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment. I really like your blog too.
Bushfires are really bad and every year hundreds of people die from them.
I had never heard of The Black Saturday Bushfire until we started learning about Natural Disasters.
Who's blog post was it? Many people in our class had chosen to do Bushfires for their presentations.
I chose to write about bushfires because at the time many bushfires were travelling around Australia. At that time my uncle was evacuated from his home. Luckily nothing was damaged and he and his family were fine.
I will definitely look at your blog again soon.
If you had to write about a disaster what would you write about?
Keep up the great work Christopher!
From Natasha
The greatest blog comment I've done this year is this:
ReplyDeleteGood discussion Braydon,
I especially liked the part how you said homework stops kids from getting QUALITY family time. Nice job, keep up the good work!
From Ian
THIS IS MY BEST COMMENT!
ReplyDeleteHi Mayan I have read that story too, It is a great story Im really liked it but the part when she died it made me cry. I really started to think what If we had thatm faith we could change the world. Just letting you know I am a christian and so is my family. Back to the questions If I bombed hiroshima I'd feel so badand turn myself in, then I would be aressted.
CHICKEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteHi Sara,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Jessica and I go to MACC.
I am really excited to be quad blogging with you and your class.
It sounds like you had alot of fun at the bake sale. What did you take in?
Whats your favourite type of slice?
From Jessica
This is my best comment,
ReplyDeleteHi Catherine my name is Mikaylan.It is good to see a post from a New Zealand school instead of mine !What is it like living in New Zealand anyway? If you are wondering what it's like in Australia it is pretty cool and everything is fun. I'm from New Zealand but never been. Thanks for checking out my blog and I'll talk to you later!
Best Regards
Mikaylan
Hey Brooke
ReplyDeleteWell done on your discussion about is bart simpson a good role model? The only thing i would do is make your arguments a little longer. But other than that I think your discussion. Your discussion was amazing what was your favourite part ?
From Ally
Hi Carys,
ReplyDeletemy name is Julien. I'm from MACC for our quadblogging. That picture is actually from the internet and is not a drawing. If you want to see some drawing go to my blog at http://6smaccjulien7.blogspot.com.au/.
Happy Blogging!
From Julien
Hi Tomasi my name is brendon from macc. Wow what an interesting story about the light went out thats a freaker story
ReplyDeleteYou can go on my blog 6smaccbrendon.blogspot.com
form brendon class 6s
Hey Dante,I’m Ben.I loved the halloween tree recount.It made me more interested in action books.I’m liking the look of your blog and if I get the book,I will read it and enjoy.Here is the link to my blog if you want to come and have a look at it
ReplyDeletehttp://www.6smaccben.blogspot.com Ben
This is actually my best.
ReplyDeleteHey
That has happened to me before when I went to my friends house which is over 2 hours away and when I got there I knocked on the door and no one answered. Then I realised that she was suppose to come to my house I had to drive all the way home and my mum was not happy at all because she is he one that was driving me and when I got back home I was to tired to do anything because of the long drive.
Did you end up seeing him ?
What was his reaction when you told him you forgot that he was coming to your house ?
Hey Christopher,
ReplyDeleteThankyou for the comment about the post! Doing this assignment helped me learn more about Tsunamis as well! ^^
I have never seen a Tsunami before either, but those sound like some pretty big waves!^^
I wrote about this for a school assignment, but I chose Tsunamis because they sounded interesting. I also did one on bushfires - another one I enjoyed too!^^
I checked out your blog and it is really cool!^^
From Jasmine :D
I found an even better comment of mine so here it goes.
ReplyDeleteHi Mayan, thank you for commenting on my blog. The reason why a small fire can start from a glass bottle is because when a sun ray comes in contact with a piece of glass, it is magnified and focused on a particular spot. If there is dry vegetation in this spot, a small fire can start.
I have never experienced a bushfire but there has been a bushfire near my area.
I would hate to be in a bushfire but I'm lucky that where I live there isn't a lot of bush.
If I was trying to prevent bushfires I would be careful of my actions and help other people to not start a fire. If there was a fire I would call 000 straight away in your case I would call 911.
Some people don't deliberately set fires on purpose but for those who do I have no idea why they do it .
I will be sure to visit your blog and comment.
Happy blogging !!
Michelle
Hey Mr Sales
ReplyDeleteI think im changing my favourite blog comment which I did on Viliamis blog in Quad blogging from Viscount School...
Hi Viliami
I really like your story because of all the descriptive language and there is no mistakes in spelling and vocabulary. I also like how you wrote it in present tense and you used lots of language that engages people in your story, it makes me want more of the story.
Anyway, Im just telling all of you that our school Mount Annan Christian College is having a Christmas holiday starting from next week on Thursday. We will be off for 6 weeks holidays and that’s what the most of Australia will be doing also. Some of us may be on our blogs in the holidays but im pretty sure that most people will be on holiday, im just telling you because we might not be on and commenting on your blogs.
When do you guys go on holiday???
From Crystal xoxo
Anyway that's my favourite blog comment now
thanks
Crystal xoxo